Your work is very good!
But, you Orientals have a hard time finishing a beautiful story.
I explain:
A story that begins with a beautiful case of sexual affinity and evolves into a relationship, where, clearly, you led us to a relationship where the protagonists come to love each other and ardently desire each other.
So, end it like a love affair, fitting him with his beloved mother-in-law and his beloved wife…
Eastern culture itself shows many relationships where the man has the daughter and the mother with their ‘wives’ or, one the wife and the other concubine…
Don’t turn the mother-in-law into a cheap whore…
Don’t turn the mother-in-law into a worldly woman… And,
Don’t turn your protagonist into a boor, a bandit. The boor, you’ve already eliminated him, the administrator…
End this novel as a BEAUTIFUL spice romance…
Ricardo Tadeu Feitosa
Dear author…
Your work is very good!
But, you Orientals have a hard time finishing a beautiful story.
I explain:
A story that begins with a beautiful case of sexual affinity and evolves into a relationship, where, clearly, you led us to a relationship where the protagonists come to love each other and ardently desire each other.
So, end it like a love affair, fitting him with his beloved mother-in-law and his beloved wife…
Eastern culture itself shows many relationships where the man has the daughter and the mother with their ‘wives’ or, one the wife and the other concubine…
Don’t turn the mother-in-law into a cheap whore…
Don’t turn the mother-in-law into a worldly woman… And,
Don’t turn your protagonist into a boor, a bandit. The boor, you’ve already eliminated him, the administrator…
End this novel as a BEAUTIFUL spice romance…